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Feb 26, 2016 14:32
8 yrs ago
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Arabic term
Lebanon
Business and IT/tech, 15+ years
Native in: French (Variants: Canadian, Standard-France) 
, English (Variants: UK, US) 
Works in: English to French, French to English, English to Arabic
توسيع و اثراء الفائدة
Arabic to English
Bus/Financial
Business/Commerce (general)
The business article talks about a deal between the Saudi Arabian Mining Company and Saudi Telecom Company, and says:
لتوسيع و اثراء الفائدة مع العملاء تحرص وحدة قطاع العمال لشركة الاتصالات السعودية على تعزيز الشراكة الوطنية مع القطاعين الحكومي والخاص
لتوسيع و اثراء الفائدة مع العملاء تحرص وحدة قطاع العمال لشركة الاتصالات السعودية على تعزيز الشراكة الوطنية مع القطاعين الحكومي والخاص
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +1 | extend and enrich the benefits |
Zeineb TRABELSI
|
| 5 | for expansion and enrichment of benefits with the clients |
Awad Balaish
|
| 2 | Extend scope of benefits. |
Chakib Roula
|
Proposed translations
21 mins
Chakib Roula
Algeria
Algeria
Native in Arabic
Specializes in field
Algeria
Shedding light out of words
Native in: Arabic , French
Works in: Arabic to French, Arabic to English, French to English, and 3 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
23
Extend scope of benefits.
An attempt.
+1
27 mins
Zeineb TRABELSI
Switzerland
Switzerland
Native in Arabic
Switzerland
Professional and on time Translations
Native in: Arabic
Works in: English to Arabic, French to Arabic, Arabic to French, and 1 more.
extend and enrich the benefits
.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Liliane Hatem
12 mins
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| neutral |
Chakib Roula
: This is totally a literal translation in relation with a very odd "source" sentence.
18 mins
|
1 hr
Awad Balaish
Saudi Arabia
Saudi Arabia
Native in Arabic
Saudi Arabia
Translation is an informative profission
Native in: Arabic
Works in: Arabic to English, English to Arabic
Related KudoZ points
:
20
for expansion and enrichment of benefits with the clients
for expansion and enrichment of benefits with the clients
Discussion
Even in Arabic the sentence " اثراء الفائدة " looks a bit odd from a stylistic point of view.